its a got a really nice soft feel to it, im not too fond on the out of key chord at 2:30 but the trippy beat is quite tasty
keep it up man
Thanks alot :D Means alot to me (:
I changed that part now, hope I did as you meant.
drums too quiet
i like the pads at the begining, but the drums are way too quiet, try adding some compression, (but not too much that the drums sound distorted) and maybe try using some drum loops or something, and yes definately too short, maybe when the pads bit finishes, keep the pads on but lose the bass and have a synth riff come in, otherwise not bad
i like the melody its very funky and unpredictable, the reversed drums sounded nice, my only criticism is the beat, its another easily recognised FL drum loop which i've seen too many times in songs here. try slicing the drums and using the same samples to make your own beat or just pick some samples. other than that nice work
thanks.. i see what i can do.. :)
It flowed really nicely, the pads and whatnot were cool, but the off beat hat sounded out of place and the drums need a bit of work rhythmically, mainly the fills but other than that good work
full thing should be mint
i really like this, kool crazy synths you got going on, i love the bit at 1:48, dont know about the vocals but i supose it wouldn't as good without them. Whole thing was totally alien and wierd, maybe could have sounded better with a bit more of a prominent beat to help make sense of it all.
nice work, i only wish i knew how to use ts404 and 3xOsc that good
No vocal work actually. A lot of stitch-n-glitch on the piano roll with high arpeggio sets to create the first shimmer effect with a simple snare (with worked break, shimmer, and reverb FX). I feel the same, another better, or dual-step melody would do wonders in the middle... Thanks!
Ts404 is great to take advantage of the Filter resonance and cut. all the wobble-dub sounds are also 404's (my dubstep set is being worked on ATM.)
i wouldn't really class this as dnb but its still really good, i love the beat and theres a really nice feel to the whole thing
I agree with you hehe most of my songs aren't DNB
i really like this, i especially liked the wierd robot sounds at the end, does sound like robot music however thats meant to sound a bit loud and unclearwhen the riff comes in, in the middle
but still all round kool
Good but repetative
it was good, VERY hardcore but just so repetative, with some melody it would be great, try adding a bit more story and flow rather than just the sample beat over and over. the beat was kool reminded me of scooter
thanks ill try harder next time
i love the drums on this, such a kool sounding rhythm, nice sort of grim style to it, whole thing sounds quite advanced
Thanks! I guess it does sound a little grim, I never really noticed that.
i like the composition of the whole thing apart from when half way through the tempo changed, theres a little too much going on a some parts, like lots of synths that sounded quite similar but still pretty kool all round.
instead of changing the tempo just make some parts double time because the tempo changes werent very subtle and kinda spoilt it.
good work none the less
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